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I like it! The layout is clean and the transitions easy to follow. The white & color text against the black background gives it an air of sophistication. Even the font choices on the tabs and title say "professional." (Just stay away from the yellows and other colors that tend to fade or gloss out against the black.) it is very attractive, especially for just five hour's work.

My one suggestion would be to jazz up the photograph by using an action shot, something like you on location in Africa with your video camera. Do you remember that shot we have of Ron, taken years ago, leaning with hes elbow on the tripod? I've always thought that a studio-type portrait is rather static if you want to put a bit of your character into a shot.

March 19, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterGraves Collins

Yea I do need some action shots maybe a page called my story....
The photography page is supposed to be promoting me as a photographer and so I am not sure how to work in the shots I have of me holding a video camera around the world fit in (I need one of me with my still camera but no one is around when I take stills). I will work on finding a way to work in some more shots and background from my travels into the site.
What do yo think about a Link on the About Me Page (that doubles as a home page) called "My Story"?
It wold also provide a place to mention how I love to spend time at my wonderful and brilliant Grandparents home in Lake Arrowhead....

Ohh I can not take credit for the design I am using to put the site together and that is how I did this in only a few hours.

Thanks for the Feedback!

March 19, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterRandall Hodges

I think Mr. Collins is speaking of the photograph of yourself on the homepage. :)

March 26, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterJeremy

I will look at what I have and see if I have a better shot.

March 26, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterRandall Hodges